One of those.. hypothetical onez ey? lol:P jk.. well.. i love it itz great.. i mean.. kinda pains me ta hear u say dat bout sum1 else but.. itz a great poem nonetheless:).. 5/5 i love you

Excellent POEM .... .... ...I LOVE EVERY WORD OF THIS POEM

Cheers
5/5
Biya

Wooow...
The feeling of love you describe there, must be amazing to have. ^^

Very moving and beautiful. Good work!
Keep it up!

Thank you for your comment. :)

This is cute beyond cute . Very well donee ! Another 5/5

I loved this so much because it gave me a really happy feeling when I read it. You chose very nice way to describe the topic. 5/5

"me without you, is my heart without a beat", i like this line most :-)

I agree with Shokry, i like tt expression too
this is a beautiful poem indeed that has a very nice flow

keep it up

I can tell how this poem have originality in her imagery , the usage of "you tripped me" the actula tripping to express how fast you fell for him is an amaising image i never seen in amy poem .

and the usage of "glowing " when you are with him :
being with the one we love alwasy take out the best of us and make us shine in his eyes.
and many poets try to express that fact but they fail to be that simple .

i can say i enjoy your simplicity in this poem and you made me smile for a long time and imagine the situation.

you are well deserving the 5/5 .

great !

Wow this is so sweet.

My love for you will never end
You are the air I breathe my friend
I need you in my life, so it can be complete
Me without you, is my heart without a beat.

favourite stanza.
Honestly awseome work