Aww, this is such a cute piece of poetry. Your emotions are so clear and raw and I like that.
Really can tell you are in love with this person, and this is one amazing way to express what yu are feeling.
Simple yet effective.
5/5

Really sweet, girl.
u truly are in love, huh?..hhe.
wish u guys all the luck..
and keep up the gud work..keep writing cool poems like this one..hhe. :)

This poem is soo straight from the heart! 5/5. Can't wait for the next one you'll make:D

A sweet and true poem straight from the heart.
Beautiful!! I'm sure the person this is dedicated to must be very special to you =]

Beautiful poem and a good description of your feelings :) but i feel that i have read many similar poems..
I believe that you have a lot of talent and that you can create something uniqe.. hope you will do that =)

Aawww i feel this same way about my bf gud poem