by iimmanni Nov 11, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm quiet for ever holding my peace, |
by iimmanni
I like it |
It was a good read but i would recommend doing a spell check always before submitting a poem. Other then that I liked the way you wrote this poem, the structure was different then most but it allowed you to say what you wanted. Keep up the good work. |