Tide

by josh mills   Nov 11, 2008


Life is like a tide of dreams.
nothing is what it seems.
endless winter and summer's pass.
like the cutting of grass.
your life ends with out meaning.
while the world around you is seemingly dreaming.
life is teeming without thinking.
we wage war for more land.
for the dreamers and thinkers,like sand.
they get covered by the tide of life.

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  • 15 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    I thought that this was pretty good. I mean I didn't understand the the part about grass but that's fine. lol Sometimes it's a good thing 2 leave the person thinking. ^.^ But I liked the story behind the poem. The things that we want ends up leaving and what we don't stays. That's what I got out of it, lol I don't know if that's what u mean but,... lol =P My favorite part in the poem was these 3 lines:

    Life is like a tide of dreams.
    nothing is what it seems.
    endless winter and summer's pass.

    For some reason that really stuck with me. It was really good. Thank u 4 posting it. ^.^ lol And sorry that I write so much, I'm just trying 2 help. lol And I think 2 much ;p lol =P

    .:Rach:.

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