I thought that this was pretty good. I mean I didn't understand the the part about grass but that's fine. lol Sometimes it's a good thing 2 leave the person thinking. ^.^ But I liked the story behind the poem. The things that we want ends up leaving and what we don't stays. That's what I got out of it, lol I don't know if that's what u mean but,... lol =P My favorite part in the poem was these 3 lines:

Life is like a tide of dreams.
nothing is what it seems.
endless winter and summer's pass.

For some reason that really stuck with me. It was really good. Thank u 4 posting it. ^.^ lol And sorry that I write so much, I'm just trying 2 help. lol And I think 2 much ;p lol =P

.:Rach:.