One Less Heartbreaker

by Broken   Jun 8, 2004


*OK, i was just in a really bad mood when i wrote this one, and i really wanted to hurt someone so i wrote a really stupid poem...yeah*

In the mist of night
You'll hear my call
I'm coming for you
Coming for your all

All that you've hurt me
All that you've caused me pain
You're the one I'm after
Its you life thats in vain

I don't carry much
Except this metal blade
But thats just back-up
In case my claws do fade

But thats never happened
And I've always won
Sometimes I do my work slow
But thats just for fun

First I'll claim my victim
And stalk him around
Then I'll whisper his name
So he knows he's been found

He'll begin to run
While I start my hunt
I can feel his heart beat
He knows what I want

I gain some speed
And leap before my prey
His eyes grow wide
They won't see another day

With a flash of my teeth
His face goes pale
He mutters some nonsense
And his tears fall like hail

I lean forward
Ignoring his cries
I'm now laughing
Before he dies

My lips graze his skin
As my teeth pierce his neck
He tries to fight but
He'll be dead in a sec

I feel his warm flesh
Slowly go cold
As I swallow his blood
His strength I do hold

I release my arms
And he falls to the floor
He's probably knocking
At heaven's pearly door

I think I did some good
In taking this man away
He's one less heart breaker
To torture us every day

**i know its gay but please comment!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by LingeringHope

    This poem is not bad at all. i don't really like the idea of revenge, but i really like the poem. i felt like i was the hunter. really, this poem i very good and not at all "gay"

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    this poem isnt stupid! i think its really good!

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    whoa...neat! lol very creative i loved it ^_^ 5's all the way sweetie <333
    -Mortaldiaga
    xxx take care

  • 20 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    it's not gay!! It's a different style that you dont find that often and it realy flows and everything!! I like it!! okay, I LUV U MUR!!! MISS YA TOO!!! BUHBYE!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by megan

    merrily this poem is not gay! i really felf ur emotion in it and i really liked it.........i kinda reminded me of what ur really like.....NO IM JOKING! i love you merrily!