Comments : Wish That Were Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa Bell

    This is so wonderful...u are very talented...
    keep it up...i give u a 5/5...better yet a 100/100!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Amazing work! I really like how you described the perfect life we all dream about and the perfect family that in our dreams we wish for. The meaning made this poem strong!

    Excelent piece!

    5/5