Carried upon a breeze

by Mr. Darcy   Nov 12, 2008


Carried upon a breeze
her soft voice came to me.
Leave the love behind now
that was not meant to be.

Her soothing words caressed
with the lightest of touch.
Dampening flames of fear,
which had burned so much.

Arms held me so tightly
and aching tears ran free.
I welcomed her embrace,
then was able to see.

All the demons revealed,
their masks no longer cloaked
The darkness within them,
The deception that choked

Beside me she remained
and my trust again grew,
I felt revitalized,
my heart beating anew.

Her soft voice a whisper
Carried upon a breeze,
'I love you' my darling,
the soul-mate of my dreams.

M. Moran and Ingrid aka Blond Angel
12.11.08

A collaboration of two hearts and minds.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    This love poem was very beautiful and romantic. It really flowed well together and that is something hard to do when written in collab but you did a great job. I loved the ending.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This is a beautiful romantic love poem. It is hard to believe that two people wrote this. The words and verses blend together so well that it is difficult to tell who wrote what line or verse. An excellent job from both of you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cardiyac

    Nice! I liked the flow and structure of this one as well as the content.

    -Cardiyac

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    What a beautiful poem from the both of you, you,ve done an excellent job on writing quite an emotional poem filled with love.
    Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A beautiful love story combined by two hearts..the words have feelings which makes the read soft as well as touching..nicely written.
    Take care

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