Comments : Carried upon a breeze

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Michael,

    Working with you is one of the easiest things I have ever done. You know what I want to say before I write down the words and vice versa. I feel so honored that you are willing to do these kind of things with me and that we make such beautiful stuff together:)
    I will vote for your part ( the major part, ha ha!) in this collab of minds!

    (((hugs)))

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    It's been a while since I have read your work. This was a nice piece, a good collab. Keep up the good work I will try to keep up reading ^__^

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww! This was sooo beautiful towards the end. :]
    Amazingly done!! :]
    I really couldn't tell who wrote what stanza.. both of you did a wonderful job.
    Absolutely flawess flow!
    Wonderful.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Very beautiful, you guys put me in a state of dream surrounded with love , beauty and passion. Unfortunately, i came to the end of the poem, so i'm wake up hoping you guys can create more poems that touches my heart like this one, oh yes you can, kel.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This is a wonderful love poem. I like this sweet side of you, Michael. You and Ingrid succeeded good to create the reader warm feelings. I can feel a lot of emotions through this poem. It wakes up my soul to the spring of love alhtough it is winter.

    Inspiring, love really can make people change.. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaklynn

    This was beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tamon G

    The collaboration was perfect. 2 poems, but 1 meaning, 1 view, 1 conclusion with the love. Like I said with Ingrid poem, I love the concept. Great work, keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A beautiful love story combined by two hearts..the words have feelings which makes the read soft as well as touching..nicely written.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    What a beautiful poem from the both of you, you,ve done an excellent job on writing quite an emotional poem filled with love.
    Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Cardiyac

    Nice! I liked the flow and structure of this one as well as the content.

    -Cardiyac

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This is a beautiful romantic love poem. It is hard to believe that two people wrote this. The words and verses blend together so well that it is difficult to tell who wrote what line or verse. An excellent job from both of you.

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    This love poem was very beautiful and romantic. It really flowed well together and that is something hard to do when written in collab but you did a great job. I loved the ending.