Staircase

by ALEX   Nov 12, 2008


Miss this flutter step,
and your heart
floats inside the void;

We're waiting for
another step to fill
what we've been
empty for.

And I'm not so unsure...

I want this,
I want this,
I want this even more.

Pressing as we're falling;

so bittersweet
this mess of feeling;

I am not the answer,
I'm the question now.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Amazing job! i love this! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    It was good, not excellent in my opinon, but it was good. Had a nice feel to it and emotion, however; the flow was a bit off and could of been a bit better with some puncuation. Overall I'll give it a 3/5

    Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

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