Carried upon a breeze (collab)

by Ingrid   Nov 12, 2008


Carried upon a breeze
his soft voice came to me.
Leave the love behind now
that was not meant to be.

His soothing words caressed
with the lightest of touch.
Dampening flames of fear,
which had burned so much.

Arms held me so tightly
and staining tears ran free.
I welcomed his embrace,
then was able to see.

All the demons revealed,
their masks no longer cloaked
The darkness within them,
The deception that choked

Beside me he remained
and my trust again grew,
I felt revitalized,
my heart beating anew.

His soft voice a whisper
Carried upon a breeze,
I love you my darling,
the soul-mate of my dreams.

This poem is a collaboration with my sweet friend Michael Moran aka Mr. Darcy.

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  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, a very nice poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Ths was beautifur! Luvd it! -Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by Tamon G

    Love the concept you and Michael did together, its like you both are thinking on the same mental wave-path. Love it......Can't wait to see more

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    I loved this one Ingrid :)
    it was a good collab between both of you.
    I never knew Mr Darcy is that good :]
    actually this was like a one piece for one person..it felt soo good reading it without having to say "both don't make sense together"
    it was a great read !

    Write on, both of you
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    it appears we have a 'love triagle' going on here!! Pistols at dawn I fear!!

    This poem flowed as easily as a stream does to the sea, always flowing and always destined to join the sea.

    Thank you.

    ((hugs))

    Michael

    *LJ, choose the weapon of your choice..for she's mine!!* lol

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