Comments : Carried upon a breeze (collab)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    it appears we have a 'love triagle' going on here!! Pistols at dawn I fear!!

    This poem flowed as easily as a stream does to the sea, always flowing and always destined to join the sea.

    Thank you.

    ((hugs))

    Michael

    *LJ, choose the weapon of your choice..for she's mine!!* lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    I loved this one Ingrid :)
    it was a good collab between both of you.
    I never knew Mr Darcy is that good :]
    actually this was like a one piece for one person..it felt soo good reading it without having to say "both don't make sense together"
    it was a great read !

    Write on, both of you
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Tamon G

    Love the concept you and Michael did together, its like you both are thinking on the same mental wave-path. Love it......Can't wait to see more

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Ths was beautifur! Luvd it! -Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, a very nice poem.