by Deven Nov 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Here we r in her bed laing there, Im looking deep in to her eyes. As are bodies get closer she can feel the uncontrollable passion flowing though me. Her hands so cold, she slowly slides it across my neck. I do the same with my hands but there so worm and her neck so cold. As i do this her eyes turn a lovely green. When see this i know now is the perfect time. I move in for the kiss and my bottom lip between her lips. Her lips so soft and her skin so smooth. The passion flows though me to her. This flow give me shivers down my spin and i can see it does the same to her. She is an amazing kisser i never want to stop, when im kissing her i feel like i can do anything. The only thing i can say after a kiss like that is WOW. |
by jenpiglet17
I think this is vey true; a kiss with the one you love is always WOW whether its just a peck hello, or what you described. its beautiful... a kiss can say what words cannot. :) |
by megan
In every poem i read of yours i can tell how much this gurl really means to you... i hope you two last and stay happy 5/5!! |
by Jessica
Haha that was very cute. |
by JeSsIcA
Aww. this is soo sweet. u can tell u really like her. :) |
Wow this was amazing. it reminds me of my first n second kiss but mostly my first. u decribe it was amzing i could have seen it in my mind. i love it and it awesome keep it up.!! |