Comments : Do I ever cross your mind (song)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ash

    WOW! This is so amazing and the repetition just added so much to the feel of the poem. I truly love the way you start with a question and continually bring forth new questions that arise from doubt. The feeling within this poem was so perfect that it was hard not to be drawn into this poem.
    Excellent work! 1mil/5 if i could.