Hardly Alone

(Corrections are in all caps)

I hear your voice through the whispering wind,
your picture bouncing through my mind,
while sitting IN this wasted space,
a part of you, I'm hoping to find.

Thinking of how you each and everyday.
If only our WASTED LOVE, captivated this way
The power of OUR love holds me in these MORTALl bonds
MY heart screams, for something it longs.

and I JUST CAN'T SEEM TO FORGET YOUR FACE
IT follows me where ever I go,
smiling behind the swaying trees,
laughing BENEATH the snow.

The wind, IT whispers your name
AND I'm sure THAT I'M inane
I can't help but feel THAT I missed out
our hearts NOW TAKE another route?

But I know that we will meet again,
when fate lays down her hand,
for when love is strong and true,
things WILL always go as planned.

Sorry If I changed your and your friend's poem too much to where I destoried it. It was a good effort and a great idea for a poem.