This is another short poem. In this one so much is said in so little amount of words. Your poems always continue to make the mind think even after they have read the poem. You have a wonderful talent.

This was sad, but I thought you did a decent job. The word choice wasn't too shabby, it was simple yet.. got across alot. Uhm, I would have liked more... but, with what there is here I thought you did a good job.. and it was short but it said a lot anyways. Good job! 5/5