by Faithless Watermelon Nov 13, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Shores are not always serene, |
by El
Interesting piece |
I've always been half and half on poetry that doesnt ryme. you have to have the best words to pull it off, and i really think you did just that. so i still enoyed this. |
by Brittany C
Great poem. It was one of those poems that just draw people in. Very nice wording. I gave this poem a 5/5. Howevver the format was not my favorite. |
WOW!! i love it! its so powerful! |
Wow...very interesting and your diction was flawless... i like the way you started this piece of art... only the truth was spoken. i like the twist you have for each stanza.... it connected the whole poem perfectly....although only those who have thoughts like yours will really understand this complex, yet beautiful piece...over all it was amazing and i enjoyed reading it. |