Wow...very interesting and your diction was flawless... i like the way you started this piece of art... only the truth was spoken. i like the twist you have for each stanza.... it connected the whole poem perfectly....although only those who have thoughts like yours will really understand this complex, yet beautiful piece...over all it was amazing and i enjoyed reading it.
5/5 from me yo deserve it!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

Great poem. It was one of those poems that just draw people in. Very nice wording. I gave this poem a 5/5. Howevver the format was not my favorite.

I've always been half and half on poetry that doesnt ryme. you have to have the best words to pull it off, and i really think you did just that. so i still enoyed this.

Interesting piece
the wording was good

i am like silent suicide i prefer poetry that rhymes i find it more... powerful?

but this is gd i liked it