REMEMBER: Id= I'd Ive = I've i= I, etc.

I must say I'm suprised by how good this is. The second stanza isn't as strong as the rest of the poem but it fit's quite well and it kind of lingers there, which I think gives the poem a good feeling.

And, it didn't seem girly at all. (: I think that might be a plus?

Kudos for the poem, darling. :D