Fake flowers ( Senryu)

by Ingrid   Nov 13, 2008


Fake flowers ( Senryu)

Alluring colors
Enchanted by their beauty,
surreal plastic spell

A challenge by my clubmate Krista

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An excellent little piece, Ingird and as Grant says - it is true about so many things.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Nicely worded. It seems to me that you meet that challenge head on. Nice job. Another 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Hello Ma'am... I guess you ll have to explain me the meaning of this short form of poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Isn't this poem so true of so many things in life you get so drawn to something or someone only to discover deception lying in wait.Well written Ingrid

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very nicely worded senryu. Great job! ;o)