Very nicely worded senryu. Great job! ;o)

Very nicely worded senryu. Great job! ;o)

Isn't this poem so true of so many things in life you get so drawn to something or someone only to discover deception lying in wait.Well written Ingrid

Grant

Hello Ma'am... I guess you ll have to explain me the meaning of this short form of poem.

Nicely worded. It seems to me that you meet that challenge head on. Nice job. Another 5/5 from me.

An excellent little piece, Ingird and as Grant says - it is true about so many things.