by Dark Savior Nov 13, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
I know this may seem odd, but it makes sense |
Good poem and flow of words is great. You should write more poems, but then the verb agreement isn't always right. Remember that plural subject, plural verb. |
by IML
I wish i can think of things to write like that |
LOL, I honestly think this poem leaves everyone nearly speechless because it's really unexpected to read something like this from you.. I actually read it as if someone was saying it.. which of course was your point because it was your opinion in some way towards the end.. but anyways, unusual write to be reading from you lol. Interesting write.. makes you think WHAT? at the end in a good way. |
by Nobodys Hero
Lol I myself am a fountain of useless knowledge and pride myself on being a nerd pml |
by Brittany C
Ummm, ok. It different I give you that. I dont know what else to say. 5/5 |