Brilliant bloody brilliant i can feel your pain from beginging to end. i do hope u find god i do hope he revels himself to u. Keep writing

i like this one alot 5/5

I know the feeling...but everyone just keeps saying even when you cant see him god is there. not surei belive in the whole thing but sometimes i think if you really have faith god will always be there for you even when you dont think he is. great poem

I have felt like this many times, but you know what? god is there, always, we are just focusing too much on the pain that we don`t let ourselves feel anything else, like god`s love.
i know it feels endless and i know it feels like god doesn`t care, like he doesn`t help, but i know he does, just have a little faith sometimes that is what gets you through.
i loved your poem, you put into words all the pain. keep writing : )
your pain will go away!

Nice poem i felt that way too at one point till i went to church and they took me to acquire the fire and it opened my eyes up to many diffrent things that i never thought in my mind. he was there trust me.

liz

Beautifuly written, and so sad.

Great emotion, and really relatable.

My heart hurt all the way through while I read your poem. True poets can make their readers feel. 5/5

mandy :)

He is right with you, remember that. A great poem, very deep. I feel like that every now and then but then I remember hes there and he always will be.

Thanks for commenting on my poem. I am glad I can make your day. Keep your head up, remember your worth so much also.

xo
Chelsea

Yeh where are you..God know's love it ;-)

Most times even when if we are praying to God with Faith his hands are still bound because of the things we do...When we take one step towards him, he takes two towards us....but God is Pure and cannot interject with our own will if our actions do not match our thoughts then he cannot help....MAny people do not understand this they think that God does not listen nor care about their needs but Jesus weeps for us when we are in pain...

The Bible says it so greatly so that we may understand...but don't quote me...If a parent full of sin loves his children and gives them gifts and good things...Then know how much more God loves his children and wants to give them gifts and good things!!