Excellently written.Basic word choice that is easy to comprehend.I've never read a acrostic poem until now, but I believe that I will read more now.Fantastic.5/5

-Amber

Very nice work Joe! You had me from the start, I really enjoyed your opening, short and true. Simple with good word choice and flow.

A day passes by,
Deep past the sky.
You my love, now gone,

This was my favorite part, but the poem as a whole, it just touches a cord for something I have gone through. Beautiful job!

This poem is kind sad. But I really liked it. I gave it a 5/5. I saw nothing wrong with it. Everything about it was great.

These poems are fun to make. They make you think a lot on how you want to start the next line. I found it fun and a challenge when I made one, but I made mine rhyme a bit as well. This is short and true. It shows emotion and its very touching. Very nice acrostic poem. 5/5 I like it =)

I love the way each line spells a word. I have never seen that before. I like the way you have used pros in this poem. Its a nice change from rhyme.

My favotie lines are:
In and out,
Memories go.

Its so strong.
Well Written
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