A short, but powerful piece.It started with sorrow, but ended with a light of hope as the lost one goes to heaven.Great flow.Excellent work.5/5

-Amber

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

I like the way you went from sadness to light in this poem, it was done very nicely. You really had me at the beginning, but I start to waiver with the words "sorrowness" the "ness" just seems out of place to me, other than that this was another good piece, you did a nice job.

Amazing poem. The emotion through out it is great. Umm, is "sorrowness" a word? Hmm, other then that word the rest of the wording was great. I gave it a 5/5.

It's a good poem with lot of emotions. Very touching. But you should certainly change the word 'sorrowness'. Because that's not the correct word. Keep writing.

Very short and sweet. I love the ending. It makes the poem not seem all that sad. It gives hope =) Only one thing seemed a little off.

"Leading toward our loved one."

I think it's meant to be "ones" since you were talking about more than one person that was close. Not sure just thought I would point that out. 5/5 Love it. =)

The mood in this poem changes from the beginning to the end which I thought was excellent. You start it out as something sad, losing someone youre close to and love.. and then realizing they go to heaven in the end .. kind of lightens the poem up a bit. :] Well done. Touching write.. short, but says a lot. Great work. 5/5.

I so adore this poem. It was ah so beautiful and powerful. With this like " Wipe those tears away." Could almost feel like I had tears on my face. That's just incredible! Like you are taking the poem reader in the depths of emotions of the grievers, and even thought it didn't ryhme it still flowed great. I liked that
Overall I love this poem!

5/5

The imadgry is amazing. I could imagine that I was in front of heaven and its gates staring upwards. Once again I like your use of proes.

Well Written
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