Why

by kelleyana   Nov 13, 2008


Why evoke my negative feelings of tension?
There were things you didn't have to mention.
Were you seeking some attention?

Don't change your criticism into request
Why putting heart's feelings to a test?
Your words giving hard times to digest

Can't a mistake stay in the past,
Or will it always go against me?
I will never go down on my knees
I'm not the one always begging please
Don't think you left me speechless
It is needless say a word

Don't think you generate power over me
By trigger my emotions and make your logic
Don't tell me to wake up, my eyes are
Already opens

Don't think of us, we're at our best away from stress
From you we take some rest.
Kelleyana.

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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Good

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow soo deep and sad but trully beautifull adn perfect wording adn rhyming ,
    we doo best in2 things extrreem piositive emotions like love , adn extreem sadness, where the words jsut get out with no limitation

    a trully touching poem ,
    and i can nto iomagine how was dificult that test was and the stress was a lot presuring ,
    we alwasy need to get s tep back adn see things again
    that is our best way to see waht we could not see before and fix things ...

    keely you amaize me more and more with your poems ^_^
    great work keep them coming ^_^

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    Wow. Such a flawless poem.
    A few mistakes here and there, but it doesnt matter, I was caught in the rapture of the words and the meaning.
    Well done,
    another great write.
    keep it up
    5/5
    xox

  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    Interesting style. I like something a little different. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    To be honest enough I liked the concept hidden in the poem. How can you just make it simpler and optimistic way of living life? I love the way your poem oozes confidence. I guess I am lucky enough.

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