To be honest enough I liked the concept hidden in the poem. How can you just make it simpler and optimistic way of living life? I love the way your poem oozes confidence. I guess I am lucky enough.

Interesting style. I like something a little different. Good job.

Wow. Such a flawless poem.
A few mistakes here and there, but it doesnt matter, I was caught in the rapture of the words and the meaning.
Well done,
another great write.
keep it up
5/5
xox

Wow soo deep and sad but trully beautifull adn perfect wording adn rhyming ,
we doo best in2 things extrreem piositive emotions like love , adn extreem sadness, where the words jsut get out with no limitation

a trully touching poem ,
and i can nto iomagine how was dificult that test was and the stress was a lot presuring ,
we alwasy need to get s tep back adn see things again
that is our best way to see waht we could not see before and fix things ...

keely you amaize me more and more with your poems ^_^
great work keep them coming ^_^

Good