Comments : In Lust

  • 15 years ago

    by Olorin

    Good poem. I definitly understand how someone, especially guys, can see a girl as just something to play around with even if theres no emotional attachment and it really sucks... I have seen this happen way to often and I myself have almost gotten entrapped in my own lust once before... I hope things work out for you. Keep writing the flow was very good and the message was nice and clear!