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by Beautiful Forever   Nov 13, 2008


Paralyzed
My heart stopped beating
My breath is taken away
Ten inches to the kiss

Slow motion
Her eyes flutter once
Her intentions clear
Five seconds remaining

Passed
Our lips press hard
Our time is fading
The moment is gone

Forever
The memory is forged
The feeling permanent
One kiss created life

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  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    This poem is AMAZING. It reminds me of my first kiss!!! which wasn't as good as this poem, but I wish it was

  • 16 years ago

    by Bethany

    Aww this poem is so sweet! 10/10 by the end of it-i was reminded of how perfect my first kiss was. great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Oh this was so beautiful! I loved how you made it almost like.. suspenseful lol. Every stanza you got closer to one another and the kiss then came towards the end and now the beautiful memory remains. :] Adorable! I loved this poem.. so enjoyable and cute! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AmirahBbydll

    This is beautifully written. Even though its short, its sweet (: 5/5

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