Damaged

by HidinVictim   Nov 14, 2008


She'll love you
The best way she knows how
But be warned
That isn't very well.

You'll have to excuse
The knife she holds
Keep dodging
The hand grenades she throws.

You have have to understand
Loves always been her foe
So you coming to pick her up
This she just does not know

Her screams of hate
Really mean I love you so
She'll love you
The best way she knows.

She holds a knife to your throat
And a gun to her own
This is her low
And a low of your own

Her eyes are so cold
But you never notice
Her eyes are cooling your own.

All the signs say
Your going the wrong say
And hearts will soon fray

But you'll love her
The best way you know how
Even if this means
You'll both end up in hell

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  • 15 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    Well, I liked the meaning to this, it was interesting. One thing I found that i don't think you meant to do, In this stanza:
    "All the signs say
    Your going the wrong say
    And hearts will soon fray "

    I think the second line, last word, was supposed to be "way" instead of "say"
    :]
    I didn't really understand this that much.. Like, i got the meaning, but you randomly went from 4 line stanzas, to 3. I didn't really like that. It was odd. Other then that though, its really good.
    Keep writing.
    5/5

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