Well, I liked the meaning to this, it was interesting. One thing I found that i don't think you meant to do, In this stanza:
"All the signs say
Your going the wrong say
And hearts will soon fray "
I think the second line, last word, was supposed to be "way" instead of "say"
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I didn't really understand this that much.. Like, i got the meaning, but you randomly went from 4 line stanzas, to 3. I didn't really like that. It was odd. Other then that though, its really good.
Keep writing.
5/5