Comments : I'm Already Gone

  • 16 years ago

    by babychuu

    This is a fabulous poem!
    well done : )

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    As expected from you. You really do write beautiful poems. :) I hope you win the contest.

    Maybe you're realizing you still have my heart and soul
    But let me warn you, don't think you can still lead me on
    ^ I really like this 2 lines. I think it's a really well done.

    Just cause I don't show emotion, you think I'm cold
    Baby you'd be shocked if you knew how much I've cried
    ^ Great lines!

    Is it surprising to know that everyday wait by the phone
    ^ I also do this :(

    Anyway... My final thoughts on this poem...
    As I said earlier it's a beautiful poem. Flow was smooth like silk. The poem really fits the title.

    5/5