It's blood made me disgusted
I only live for blood like yours
My dear, you were so full of life
Some people trickle, but you pour

^^ that made me laugh. sick, huh? I love this one. :P it is n uber visual poem, jesse. mucho fabuloso <3

5/5

*laughs at the comment above*

Does no one see the metaphores in this? The poem isnt just a story about a vampire, it goes so much deeper.

This is just...so...idk...vivid. I LOVED it.
I love the image you played about a vampire. I mean after all..everyone seems to fall in love with them.lol.(Metaphorly speaking).
Still this was one of the best!

victoria

I love it. It was thee' best.

I love this. It was amazing. I mean, wow.