So heartbreaking hun.
Im sorry.
I can imagine what this conclusion is doing to you sweety, tearing you apart.. making you question yourself...
Im always here to talk..

Luv ya Darling.
-Elaine. 5.5

Oh wow.
this is so deep. [:
I love itttttt!
Keep writingggggggg.
:D

Nicely written...I like that this poem was written in a sort of confessional manner. I can feel the emotion running through th epoem from start to finish.The rhyming was great.the simple words that you used really allows gets to the reader...to feel and relate to the emotions that you have displayed.

Excellent Job
5/5

5/5