WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

Woah..strong emotions.
it was awesome...yet kinda sad.
enwei..keep up the gud work. :)

A very good poem with strong emotions added =] This piece is a great write, awesome job ^^

Wow, can't say best poem ever. But I can say, true emotion, and that is what makes a poem. kudos to you. 5/5 all the way. From AJ