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by BlueDreams Nov 15, 2008 category : Love, romance / lasting love
Your image is implanted, In my mind, I am enchanted, Your desires must be granted, In a prayer that's ever chanted... Your touch is like a fire, And it's fueling my desire, Brings my yearning ever higher, Ignores warning signs so dire... Such a strange, elated feeling, From my heart, all rhythms stealing, As my mind is sent off reeling, There is nothing more appealing... Fear of what it is your doing, And what plans you have ensuing, What spells for me are brewing, And what path we are pursuing... I'm corrupted by this needing, For your touch, on it I'm feeding, To your side I'm always speeding, Never any advice heeding... When I cannot help you bear, All the things that you can't share, Though I would, I truly swear, If you'd only let me dare... The simplest of emotion, Yet as large as any ocean, Soothing, gentle in its motion, For you I give all my devotion... Every feeling in my heart, Every word within my art, Nothing keeps we two apart, From thee I never shall depart. These things I swear through rhyme and verse, Never would I need rehearse, All these words, these feelings true, Do I pledge, my love, to you. Yours... Albert.
by Deana
I like this style,and the content as always is excellent. Very romantic and sincere.
by Sourav
Very rhythmic and well structured writing. It's a very emotional write. Full of genuine emotions. Lovely to read!
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