Thoughts

by gracey grey   Nov 15, 2008


There she blows......

Twitching,twisting

Curving, curling

Soaring high, calling out

Blundering here, saluting there

Flashing bright, twinkling right

Backward, forward
Sometimes up, at times low

Making waves, slamming raves
It stops. My thoughts!
Ding dong! Be gone
so long.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Very meaningful and to the point. I like it very much!

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is simply awesome, so very unique, loved it all the way.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A very thought provoking write....
    Good usage of words in a powerful message!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    :) now this is the first time I've read a poem about thoughts. I liked the descriptions you used. Thoughts just go crazy without our consent..good one!
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hullo well that was an interesting poem and one i enjoyed thouroughly and read four times.LOL
    I actually had a bit of a chuckle when i read this
    Well done

    Grant

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