Comments : Beaten on the floor

  • 16 years ago

    by PoeticSoul

    That was a really good poema nd you write very beautiful as well and i myself have gone through the same so i know that feeling. I dont know if this poem is a personal experiance or not but if so I know that feeling o so well and i can definately relate

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    That was so terribly sad.. This poem made me cry... that it was powerful..I'm almost speechless...It was great poem.. 5/5