Comments : Something Missing (Minute Poem)

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    It's a sad story and well put. I enjoyed the read that is for sure.

    I felt that there wasn't much that could be improved, perhaps the bottom. You always explain yourself..I know that a lot of people know what the poems are, but I can see why you put a description of what the poem is.

    I don't really feel that there is anything else that I would like to say other than. You did an amazing job and that you should continue to challenge yourself.

    P.S. thanks for the comments and vote :D