Precious words

by kelleyana   Nov 15, 2008


Smart and talented you seems,
Your words makes me day dream,
Now I've shared your passion for prose,
Breathtaking words that touches me most

I've found laughter in your words,
Sometimes tears fell from my eyes,
Without the time to cry, I've seen hopes
So when troubles occurred,
I'm convinced it can turn out well
I've fear the worst, but expect always the best
All those positive responses
Had never drives me away,
But make me takes heed

Your words are like music to my ears,
Like the fuel to romance and love
You once told me that; blissful and romance is the key
Channel to make a couple grow in love,
Again you make me understand that, behind smiles
You know when there is sadness, behind laughter you
Know when they're tears, but behind me is you who cared,
Of those beautiful words you'd shared, I must
Tell you that I also care.

kelleyana

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  • 13 years ago

    by OrangeJuicePerez

    I can't stop reading the first six lines in your second stanza. Laughter to tears, troubles to hopes, worst to best: you make these opposites relate to each other and to what you are saying stupendously! I perceived a tight bond between you and the one you wrote of from finishing your poem. Optimism, knowledge, hope, and happiness are all given to you by the one written of and there is not a whole lot better to receive than that. I've grabbed onto those same four qualities by reading what you wrote. To me, it is amazing to have read that this was written in 2 minutes and that english is a foreign language to you. To a talent: I thank you for your comments and votes for my poems. Seeing those updates pop up for them were great. Lastly, I apologize for the length of this comment. You write wonderfully!

  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Oh that one was good

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    Awwe.. this is such a beautiful poem =)
    I like how you use your words, and add them.. and then create such a beautiful poem. =)

    Well done, and keep it up =)
    5/5
    xox

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfully Penned, Enjoyed!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well Kelleyana your poem is beautifully written and i'm sure your friend must be so pleased with such a lovely tribute, and your english is coming along well too
    Well done

    Grant

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