I can now make out that this topic of love is your forte. How amazingly and ordinarily you can complete write such a wonderful poem in 2 mins. Its nice to challenge ourselves. You have won your challenge.

Well Kelleyana your poem is beautifully written and i'm sure your friend must be so pleased with such a lovely tribute, and your english is coming along well too
Well done

Grant

Wonderfully Penned, Enjoyed!!!

Awwe.. this is such a beautiful poem =)
I like how you use your words, and add them.. and then create such a beautiful poem. =)

Well done, and keep it up =)
5/5
xox

Oh that one was good

I can't stop reading the first six lines in your second stanza. Laughter to tears, troubles to hopes, worst to best: you make these opposites relate to each other and to what you are saying stupendously! I perceived a tight bond between you and the one you wrote of from finishing your poem. Optimism, knowledge, hope, and happiness are all given to you by the one written of and there is not a whole lot better to receive than that. I've grabbed onto those same four qualities by reading what you wrote. To me, it is amazing to have read that this was written in 2 minutes and that english is a foreign language to you. To a talent: I thank you for your comments and votes for my poems. Seeing those updates pop up for them were great. Lastly, I apologize for the length of this comment. You write wonderfully!