Remember Me, When...

by Nonna   Nov 15, 2008


Remember me when she ask about your past
Tell her what we had, never meant to last

Remember me when you first go out
Tell her you love her without a single bit of doubt

Remember me when she calls you her life
Don't you ever cause her any kind of strife

Remember me when you hold her hand
And when things go wrong,try to understand

Remember me when she sheds her first tear
And whenever she needs you,please stay near

Remember me when you kiss her good night
Keep her smiling and hold her tight

Remember me when you look at her eye
Please,don't leave her wondering why

And remember me when you broke her heart
Tell her you're sorry,smartly play your part

The truth behind your lies,she will never know
Just another girl you will forget,once you let her go

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  • 15 years ago

    by NEIL MUNRO

    Another realy good poem, i could hear you say every word. Going to add you to my favourites thats for sure

  • 15 years ago

    by i want 2 live in a fairytale

    Simply expressed but deeply touchingg...
    tht was really perfect:)
    keep it up
    u r talented:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Meg

    This was an absolutley amazing poem, i felt my eyes tear up after reading it, i loved the flow of this, and it was really easy to relate to, really wonderful, keep writing :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Hello..
    I really liked the idea of this piece..it's so true for guyz, haha !
    I only have one small criticism
    "Tell her what we had never meant to last"
    I think you should put a comma after had..like
    "Tell her what we had, never meant to last"
    I thought it was kinda hard to understand.

    Even though the rhyming words were cliche..your idea strengthened the rhyme and it was very powerful.
    when I first read this poem, came to my mind that this might be a mother talking to her ex husband, telling him to never break their child's heart..but the ending wasn't convenient to my thought, lol

    But this was good, just don't push the rhyme too hard next time and it'll come out perfect :)
    Write on

  • 16 years ago

    by Bethany

    This is an amazing poem! after your done reading it causes you to almost take a step back and soak it all in. 10/10 awesome! i can really relate.

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