Comments : Without you i die

  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    Just Love it
    Chins

  • 15 years ago

    by Enigma

    I really like the first three stanzas! I can quite relate xD
    Really good poem, first one I've read of yours, but I'll have to check the others out too !

    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    Very nice, i feel mixed emotions when i read it.
    please write more...
    will be back shortly to check on them.
    Lovee.Kelseaa.
    xo

  • 15 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    Very sad, and well written.
    good job!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    So many people have been through something similar, including me. I like the portray of emotions. Good job, 5/5. Em x

  • 14 years ago

    by XxIn LoVexX

    This is a very deep and good poem i love it its well writen.. ive been through the same thing and it sucks and it hurts. very good love it. 5/5 <3