This title really captured my attention and made me anxious to read the poem!

Ahh this was amazing! The ending, oh my just blew me away! Okay first of all, thank you for writing such a unique and refreshing poem. It feels so good reading something different from the everyday norm. I feel as if I got a sneak peak inside how your brain works and my dear it works so poetically! Just left me in awe. I could tell this was a personal poem for you and came straight from your heart and even if it doesnt make sense to others, it made sense to you when you wrote it and that means so much more. Others can interpret it any way they want and take back from it what they please. As for me I was very much impacted by this. Remembering the memories you experianced with someone you love and how they always seem to replay in your mind at the randomest times. This made me think of the guy I like and made me smile along the way.

Your choice of words here were flawless in creating the scene and getting across your message. Varied vocabulary choice made for a not so simple read but also didnt overpower the poem like "big words" do sometimes. It was just perfect. The flow was great and again I commend you on the style, it was very interesting to read and experiance. Very effective in getting the meaning of your poem across.

Well done!
Why this doesnt have anymore comments I have no idea but it does deserve a *5/5* :]