That was very well done and very.. true. Don't drink and drive! Ever! I liked how you showed the feelings the man had, and what ACTUALLY happens to people who choose to do this. One tip, "No my car?" Should be "No, my car?" I believe theres a couple more places where there should be a coma like that one, but its not necessary, just might help the flow a bit, good job though.
5/5
*Chaotic Angel*

I really like this one. it's very good. people can relate to how they think the drinking will end their pain, but it won't. nice job.

Im speechless this poem was amazing

I love it is agreat poem

I liked this alot.
I seen this happen to family members.
I have even see this happen to me.
I mean im not 21 but I used to use
Alcohol to hide my pain
and occasiounly I still do.
But I loved it.
Great Imagery
Take care..
5/5
-Kortney

Really excellent poem..
5/5.

An excellent poem, your description was brilliant, 5/5