Wow, I was not expecting this. It is truely amazing and filled with emotion. I loved your metaphors and the vivid description that you painted in my mind. The power of the love you described here leaves me speechless.

"But I couldn't stay away,
I needed him
He was an angel who was drowning
when I knew how to swimThis is definately going on my faves."
These were some of the most romantic lines

"I have ever read.but it is so much more than that
it is like I know him, as he does me
When a bird first learns to fly
its almost as free"
And these lines were poetic art.

Great Job 5/5