by StonedGooberz Nov 17, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The midnight sky is beautiful |
by xxxStarSxxx
Wow! This is amazing! I can also relate to this poem really well at this point in my life. It always helps if the writer can connect with the reader and you have no problem doing that. |
by Teria
This is a really, really good poem. You did a good job describing and portraying the emotions and you did a wonderful job writing it. I think that the flow needs some work, which is fixed below... but other than that it's wonderful. |
by Brittany C
Wow the wording was great. The image the words formed was very vivid. I loved it. The length of the poem was fitting. Hmm, I really see nothing wrong with anything in this poem. I really liked it. I gave it a 5/5. |
by Hollymariee
The midnight sky is beautiful |
by Vox
Bro... that was deep. To express yourself so clearly and make yourself known. I am truely amazed. |