Spindles End

by DarkCrystalbtrfy   Nov 17, 2008


And so for where it starts
Is where it ends
Upon a lonely spindle's end
Then Rose fell into a deep sleep
Only awakened by true loves first ring
Cinderella who was dressed in blue
Had untill midnight to drop her clue,
But midnight came and she did lose
The glass slipper that was full of use
Rapunzal,Rapunzal, let down your long hair
So Rapunzal did and what she got wasn't fair
A love's romance but she had to lie
But in the end all that happened was true despise
Anastasia went looking to find her true path
Defeated a villian and held some class
But in the end she found
Love's taste to be worth more then
Any amount of money that could be found
An apple, a prince, and an ugly witch
That's what you get when you mix
Sleeping beauty with a plot that just can't be missed
There was a story as old as time
Beauty and the Beast
It was an intresting rhyme
It told of a Beast who fell in love
It told of Belle who was utterly repulsed
But they both figured out how to love
And in the end it was a good story told
There was a mermaid who longed for land
Sadly it was hard to understand
For her father who just got mad
A stormy sea, and angry sky
A ship wrecked, by the dead of night
A drowning prince, a determinded soul
They fell in love when the ships bell tolled
So for where it starts is where it ends
Upon a lonely spindles end

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  • 14 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this was so great and so entertaining i mean all the little classic stories you broke down and made so simple and combined them you did a great job i loved it 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Helena Jaster

    Wow I am really impressed. Your use of classic fiction to exemplify your point was very well done. And that repition of the lone "So for where it starts is where it ends, upon a lonely spindles end" is just a very gripping and captivating piece of language. wonderfull.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Cinderella who was dressed in blue
    Had untill midnight to drop her clue,
    ^^ i loved those lines : )

    i loved how you named so many kid stories and put them in simple terms it was very very refreshing
    your wording was great only suggestion would be to make it into stanza's!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

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