Im speechless this poem was amazing

Cinderella who was dressed in blue
Had untill midnight to drop her clue,
^^ i loved those lines : )

i loved how you named so many kid stories and put them in simple terms it was very very refreshing
your wording was great only suggestion would be to make it into stanza's!!! 5/5

Wow I am really impressed. Your use of classic fiction to exemplify your point was very well done. And that repition of the lone "So for where it starts is where it ends, upon a lonely spindles end" is just a very gripping and captivating piece of language. wonderfull.

Wow this was so great and so entertaining i mean all the little classic stories you broke down and made so simple and combined them you did a great job i loved it 5/5