Comments : Tired Souls

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    These lines really made me feel the Tired Soul.

    "One foot in front as I dress like your doll
    Dryer skin gets covered in buttery blink
    Give me hope and I will give you my all
    Broken inside
    Unable to think"

    Very well written and descriptive.

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Wow, this poems is honestly great.

  • 15 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Beautifully awful imagery, at a loss for words, truly took my breath away!!